Like the clouds in the sky
Like the maskara of the eye
Thou art the love of my life
That makes it rich and complete
Like the song of a mynah
In the winter's chill
Warming my inner core
Burning me pure
Thou art the daughter of Venus
That keeps me feeling warm
Kindling my candle of life
Full of glowing Light,
Like the dawn of spring
Like the peacock's wing
You fill my life with love and amour
Of myriad colours
Like the song of a poet
Dance of ballet
You make me advance each day
To prosper more than the previous day
You fill me with passion
Of love and peace
In the setting sun
In the twilight's sea
You make me bloom
With thy company so charming
Like the thundering light
That is full of might
You fill me profoud with emotions deep
4 comments:
a good lovely poem about love - the inner side of the man. i appriciate it, but think about your craft, which very old and traditional. work upon it, you wiil be a good poet. i approched your blog from shrish ji's blog.
with good wishes.
ragini
thnx for ur valuable comment miss ragini
hey .. a lovely piece yeat again..! Its great readint the Victorian aspects yu've used in it! keep up the work!!
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